Tae-Yul thought to himself,"For my plan to work, I have to be a pilot. If I get the wrong assignment... I can't fly...". Everyone crowds around a sheet posted on the wall. He looks at the sheet praying. The K names.Kaneyama Nobuo. Bomber.
The bombers get rice and beans and some kind of meat as their last meal. Tae-yul trims his finger nails and cut a lock of hair to put in a little box. He then writes a letter and places it on top of the box.
Tae-Yul sets off with the other bombers. They encountered bad weather conditions and were ordered to fly back. The bombers were thrown into prison for failing their mission.
Tae-Yul was freed by the Americans soldiers and was sent back to Korea after the Japanese lost the war. Tae-Yul was dropped off at his home by an American jeep and saw his mother's shocked face. They hugged each other happily, reunited back with each other.
The End.
Your story lacks dialogue and interaction between characters which would interest your readers better.
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